marmoset13

I really need to teach some of these writers proper English. 🤦‍♂️

Using the the F-bomb is a total turn off. Stop using it because it shows that you have either a small vocabulary or a lack of creativity. You also should quit using "Jesus Christ" because  it makes you look like you are obsessed with him. 

It's spelled dying, not dieing.  Also, please learn the difference between breath and breathe. Breath is a noun, breathe is a verb. 

Many visual novel writers are arrogant and will not heed constructive criticism, thinking that they are always right.

I have noticed that many non-English speaking writers (usually Asians) have trouble with the concept of plural and singular.