I really need to teach some of these writers proper English. 🤦♂️
Using the the F-bomb is a total turn off. Stop using it because it shows that you have either a small vocabulary or a lack of creativity. You also should quit using "Jesus Christ" because it makes you look like you are obsessed with him.
It's spelled dying, not dieing. Also, please learn the difference between breath and breathe. Breath is a noun, breathe is a verb.